This is my blog. I am using for my classes in English at the Army Polytechnic School.
sábado, 18 de junio de 2011
WRITING UNIT 8
Dear Editor,
I am writing to express my concern about the advertisement appeared on page 90 of the magazine last Monday. I think this announcement is not quite true.
The advertisement said that styling cream OSIS THRILL-10 is perfect for any hairman. And that no matter if applied wet or dry hair. Unfortunately this is not truebecause the images you see in the advertisement is dry hair and professional stylists.
In addition, the advertisement used false information to sell the styling cream. I haveused this product several times and the 'thriller OSIS-3' was the best I have tasted.
The 'OSIS-thriller 10' does not leave a good image as it is combed. I recommend buying the old product, a video to let people know the same and its usage. I like first reports of a product for later use.
Thank you for your attention.
Marcelo Arevalo
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